Persuasive Essay/Researched Argument Sample Assignment and Essay

 

Creating an Argument through Research

Caroline Vickers, Instructor

 

The purpose of this essay is to create an argument for a particular audience concerned with your topic and/or discipline. In order to write a convincing, valid, and well-reasoned argument, you will need to do extensive research investigating previous research on the topic. Valid research must be associated with an ongoing conversation in a discipline and must serve the purpose of continuing that conversation in a meaningful way. Therefore, it is important not only to give a synopsis of previous research, but also add your own analysis to further that which has already been accomplished. This could include collecting your own set of data or simply drawing a larger conclusion from various pieces of research. Either way, it is important that your research have a purpose and that you, not the previous research from the discipline, drive the research paper.

 

How does one go about the research process?

 

Step One:   First, it is necessary to define an area of interest for yourself. You had the opportunity to take this step when you chose a line of inquiry for the Rhetorical Analysis Essay. However, try to think of a specific question which you want to answer within your chosen discipline. This is your research question. You will turn in a proposal stating your research question, how you formulated it, and a hypothesis. (due Sept. 28)

 

Step Two:   The second step in the research process is to go to the library to find previous research in your area of interest. In order to become well versed in a line of inquiry within a field, it is necessary to read at least 10 sources. After reading various sources, you will probably find it necessary to narrow or in some way redefine your research question and possibly your hypothesis. You will turn in a annotated bibliography detailing the information from your sources. (due Oct. 12)

 

Step Three:          Next, you will begin to show how you draw your conclusions from the previous research. You may feel the need to collect your own small sample of data, or you may be in a position to answer your research question by synthesizing, analyzing, and making inferences. At this point, you will present some preliminary findings to the class. (Week 9) You should write an abstract of your research, summarizing your research question, how you formulated it, and your findings. (due Oct. 14)

 

Step Four:  Now you are ready to write a draft of your research paper. It is important that you have a purpose for your argument and that this purpose is clear to your audience. Your research paper will then be driven by that purpose to persuade your audience. You will turn in a first draft of you paper and then revise. (First Draft due Oct. 19)

 

Step Five:   Finally, you should revise and edit extensively, and you are ready to turn in the final version of your paper. (due Nov. 4)

 

 

SAMPLE ESSAY

MARRISSA PERRY

 

Excavating an African Burial Ground:

Lack of Funding Could Mean Loss of Information Forever

 

As children growing up in the United States, educated through our public schools, we learned about the institution of slavery, which was an integral part of life in our country for nearly 300 years. We do not usually question the historical facts we learned about slavery or ask how we know so much about the history of these people (the enslaved Africans in America) who left behind so little written record. In the classroom, archeologists do not receive much credit, but it is largely through their work and research that we have been able to learn about “America’s diverse ethnic heritage” (Singleton 155). In the 1960’s, excavations of slave cabins inspired a new area of research. Today’s field of African-American Archaeology was born from these first digs, only three decades ago. Archaeologists carefully and skillfully collect artifacts, which are “tangible material remains and by-products of behavior” (Singleton 156). Through historical and ethnographic analysis and interpretation, archeologists are able to put together pieces of the daily lives and living conditions of the first African-Americans.

One such African-American archaeological dig, called the African Burial Ground Project, is currently taking place in New York City. In 1991, the construction crew for a new, $276 million federal office building stumbled across the skeletons of what are now known to be early African slaves. The United States General Services Administration (GSA), the government agency that handles the funding and administration of all federal property, began further exploration of the site. Today we know that this “plot of land is just a sliver of the 18th century cemetery now known to lie under five city blocks surrounded by New York’s City Hall, the U.S. Courthouse, and the State Supreme Court” (Brunius 16). Many people, including scholars, historians, archaeologists and members of the African-American community consider the African Burial Ground Project “the nation’s most significant archaeological find of the century” (Brunius 16). Usually GSA is able to handle their responsibilities with federal properties, but they are not doing a good job with this project. Unfortunately, the GSA has significantly mishandled the African Burial Ground Project. As the overseers of this project, the GSA is responsible for the project’s insufficient funds and the under-skilled archaeological team who damaged many artifacts. The multitude of information that the African Burial Ground holds presents a priceless opportunity to learn about the lives and conditions of slaves living in the North, and it is therefore time to fully fund this project.

It was not until recently, through studying remains found at the African Burial Ground site, that we discovered a significant African presence in early New York. Virtually all of these people were enslaved. “It is not generally understood that 40% of the original Dutch colony and up to 20% of the English colony were enslaved Africans” (Brunius 16). In 1626, slaves were brought to New York, the city that had been inhabited two years prior by the Dutch and named New Amsterdam. At one point in colonial times, New York was guilty of working more slaves than any other colony with the exception of South Carolina (Staples 14). For two centuries, until 1827 when slavery was outlawed in New York, these Africans worked for the Dutch and English clearing the land, laboring on farms, and loading and emptying ships; essentially, they built the city’s infrastructure (Satchell 51). Thus we can no longer view the North as free; for many years, it was a place that subjected Africans to a harsh life that nearly parallels that of plantation life in the South.

Many slaves worked for New York inhabitants under poor conditions and faced high death rates, and in turn, a solution was needed for the disposal of the many deceased slaves. British, living in New York, implemented the “policy of mortuary apartheid” in 1697. By this law, dead slaves were to be put to rest in a bleak, 5-6-acre piece of land on the very outskirts of the city. Early records suggest, that the African Burial Ground was opened in the 1750’s at what were then the outskirts of the city (LaFee E-1). The burial ground was closed in 1794 because of quick growth of the “land-hungry Manhattan,” and soon after, the dead “were shunted aside or paved over whenever the need arose” (Staples 14). So it was here, at the African Burial Ground over 200 years ago, that an estimated 20,000 African men, women and children, slave and free, found their final resting place (Brunius 16).

In 1991, when the construction crew building the federal office building, discovered bones belonging to hundreds of slaves, the government assigned the GSA to facilitate further excavation. Since this time, the project has been subject to numerous mistreatments by the GSA. When the GSA realized that there were hundreds of skeletons in the ground, they employed a large force of workers to “excavate the remains as quickly as possible” (Satchell 51). To the GSA, the hundreds-year-old cemetery was an expensive and time-consuming obstacle to the construction of their building (Collison 17). The haste of the excavation set off black activists, because due to the team’s lack of experience in handling African-American remains, the artifacts suffered irreversible damage. New York’s Metropolitan Forensic Anthropology Team was then selected by the GSA to conduct research on the remains. Michael Blakey, an African American who is the project’s current director and one of GSA’s most vocal critics, argued that these people had no experience in African history, culture, or skeletal biology. To African-Americans, one of the most important aspects of this project is the information being revealed about their ethnicity; the forensic team only knew how to conduct a criminal, not a cultural, investigation (Satchell 52).  For the black community, the burial ground is a tie to their past; it offers hope for a better understanding of who they are, where they come from, and what their ancestors’ lives were like in 18th and 19th century America.

Not only was the GSA criticized for their initial treatment of the project, but they also ran into trouble managing the project funds. Certainly the African Burial Ground is going to be a very expensive project; it is very involved, and has been called one of the largest archaeological projects in our country. Once again, the GSA fell subject to ridicule because the funds it is providing are running out, and they are not being cooperative in providing further supplement for the completion of the project research. Blakey, frustrated with the situation, took control and proposed a $10 million research project (Collison 17). His work was to be conducted by African-American scientists at Howard University, who would be experienced and educated in handling African remains, and their focus was to reveal a vivid understanding of the living conditions of African slaves. It took demonstrations at the burial site, lobbying by black activists, public officials and academics, including U.S Representative Gus Savage and N.Y. Mayor David Dinkins, to convince the GSA to approve Blakey’s proposal (Satchell 52). The GSA was extremely hesitant to let the research out of their hands, but finally in 1993 the African Burial Ground Project went under the direction of Michael Blakey. It was funded by the GSA. With a budget of $15 million, through spring 2000, allotted to cover three main areas: the research, an interpretation center, a memorialization effort (New York Beacon 12).

Although Blakey has been grateful to have the research under his control, working with GSA for the past six years has been a constant struggle. “They would never let us submit for the total amount,” stated Blakey, “We’ve had to do the contract on a piece-by-piece basis. The GSA’s goal is to reduce the costs and the scope of this project” (Collison 17). Because the funding is in phases, Blakey’s research and his staff’s paychecks have suffered numerous delays. The most recent dispute concerns Blakey’s proposal for more funds. The GSA is sticking to the original agreement in which they agreed to fund the research only through April of 2000 (Ferris 6). There are 370 skeletons yet to be analyzed, and the DNA research has just barely gotten under way (Collison 16). GSA does not seem willing to give more support to Blakey’s crew even though there exists an enormous amount of potential discoveries, made only through a complete study of the African Burial Ground Project.

Fortunately, public awareness and community pressures have put the GSA on the spot and forced the agency to take action. They are making a move to better accommodate the project’s needs, but the agency is running into some problems. Recently, the GSA asked the Advisory Council on Historical Preservation for guidance with the project’s funding situation. The GSA wants to know if they should go beyond the original contract and give the burial ground project more money. “We’ve been totally kept out of the loop by the contractors, GSA, and all other parties,” said Charlene Vaughn with the Historical Preservation Council (Ferris 6). The GSA is looking for help and making an attempt to support the project better, but because the agency has been distant for so long, it is going to take much more of an effort than they seem willing to give. Other people have been “kept out of the loop” as well. Apparently, the GSA is responsible for circulating a status report of each component of the project’s progress. This is then supposed to be available to the public. Ayo Herrington, an involved community member, said that such a report has not been issued for the past five years (Ferris 6). As Sherrill Wilson, in charge of handling the interpretation center, stated, “At some point, the GSA is going to have to come forward and say this is what we’ve done, this is where we are, this is what we plan to do” (Wilson 6). The federal agency is showing signs of improvement, but research and the general progress of the African Burial Ground Project continues to suffer because of the GSA’s slow action and lack of effort.

          Meanwhile, GSA officials say that the original agreement allotted funding for research on the remains through April of 2000 (Ferris 6). For Blakey and his research team, this means their work may be cut short in only a few months. The interpretation center and memorial are brilliant complements to the excavation, but the importance and meaning of the Burial Ground lies in the discoveries made through researching the artifacts. Augustine Holl, an archaeologist with the University of California at San Diego, said, “human remains dating back some 200 years isn’t very long ago in terms of science, but it represents a significant portion of African-American history”(LaFee E-1). Given the wealth of information that has already emerged after just the little work done to date, it would be a shame to hinder the further progress of the research.

          Researchers have already learned about two primary areas of slaves’ lives: the conditions enslaved Africans endured in New York, and the African culture they brought with them. First of all, living conditions for the slaves were far from easy. Not only was Manhattan a harbor town in the 17th and 18th centuries, but also a principal gateway to the New World. Although some slaves were used for domestic labor, most were in charge of working the docks, loading and emptying ships (Collison 17). The physical demands of this work were visible to Blakey’s research team through examination of the bones. They observed enthesopathies on the arms, legs, and shoulders, which are areas on the end of bones where muscle has been torn away. Essentially enthesopathies are enlarged muscle attachments. Furthermore, nearly half of the estimated 20,000 Africans buried were children under the age of twelve (Satchell 52). In Michael Satchell’s article titled “Only Remember Us,” he writes about one of these children who the research team has been labeled “No. 39.”  “He was malnourished and anemic from birth, and he suffered serious infections throughout his short life. Enlarged anchor pints on the bones of his arms show his muscles were unusually developed from heavy lifting. Fractures of his first and second cervical vertebrae—the neck bones—attest to major trauma from carrying large loads on his head. No. 39, an African-America child, was killed by slavery” (Satchell 51). Fractures in the neck were common among adults as well. Researchers say that circular fractures at the base of the skull sometimes allowed the spine to push up into the cranial cavity leading to death (Satchell 52). Rickets, curvature of the bones due to a vitamin D deficiency, is evidence of another illness that slaves suffered. This disease was observed in the bones of a five-year-old boy. Malnutrition was common. A jawbone with teeth shows lack of meat and certain vegetables among one slave’s diet (Gaines B01). In evaluating his research Blakey said, “It isn’t surprising to find enslaved people worked very hard, but it is stunning to see lesions that show they have been worked beyond the margins of physical capacity, especially undernourished children” (Satchell 52). The realities revealed by Blakey’s research clearly show that conditions faced by black slaves in the north were just as harsh and inhumane as those in the south.

          Research on the African Burial Ground Project is also crucial to establishing the slaves’ biological and cultural links to ethnic groups in Africa. So far, with the funds available, DNA analysis of thirty (of over 400) skeletons has been conducted (Collison 16). Mitochondria DNA (mDNA), the strand of DNA that is passed down the matrilineal side, is often extractable from bones. Results from mtDNA analysis suggest many of the slaves were originally from Benin Ghana, Senegal, and Niger (LaFee E-1). With so many skeletons yet to be studied, however, this research is far from finished.

There are other methods and clues that confirm researchers’ belief that the slaves buried at the New York site we African born. The people, who loved these slaves the most, often family members and fellow slaves, buried them with care. Many of the bodies were placed in wooden coffins with coins, buttons, toys, shell, beads, and/or pottery placed alongside the bodies. Following African custom, some skeletons had teeth that had been filed to points or contained cosmetic fillings (Staples 14). It appears that many of these slaves came from different states of Africa but belonged to the same ethnic group, the Ashanti. This hypothesis is based on results from cranial measurements and recovery of waist beads buried with many women. One of the most remarkable discoveries of the project is the heart-shaped symbol found on the coffin of a 35-year-old man’s coffin. The heart, formed by a series of nails, has been tied to the Ashanti symbol called Sankofa. “Sankofa means return and retrieve the past, or look to the past,” Blakey has noted (LaFee E-1). The symbol shows that the Africans felt it was important to recognize and know the past. To support this interpretation, Blakey invited the Ghanaian chief to visit the U.S. The Chief said that not only did he come to affirm the cultural and spiritual connections of the African-American slaves to Africa, but he also asked for forgiveness of his peoples’ past rulers who helped maintain the trans-Atlantic slave trade (Gaines B01).

These are just some of the ways research has helped give us a better understanding of the conditions of salve-life in the north and the slaves’ cultural ties to Africa. We, as a country and society, can benefit from this information, and this is why it is essential that GSA continue to fund the project. Michael Blakey spoke about a sad repetition of history he sees represented in the African Burial Ground Project: “These people were poorly treated in life 200 years ago and in some ways things haven’t changed that much. Getting the money necessary to fully understand who they were, to properly rebury and remember them has been very, very difficult” (LaFee E-1). The GSA has done a disservice to the project by being inconsistent in distributing funds, slow to pay employees, and hesitant in coming to decisions about the levels of funding. Ultimately the GSA’s inconsistency in disbursing money has made the advancement of the research and further study extremely difficult, and many people involved in the project fear their work will ultimately be impossible to conduct without funds.  The GSA needs to take proper responsibility for the African Burial Ground Project and distribute the money. Because GSA is in charge of federal lands, they need to recognize that they do not have the money to fully fund the project, but that they need to be leaders and work to get whatever money is needed. This project has gotten a lot of local and national attention in the past eight years, so there are many people in the New York community who are concerned about the project’s future. The GSA should take advantage of this situation and work with the community to find a way to come up with adequate funds.

The importance of the African Burial Ground Project cannot be over emphasized; Warren Barbour, the first African-American to get a Ph.D. in archaeology, states this nicely: “The history of the burial ground ends where the history of our country begins. And it shows us that we had a presence in the New World. That we contributed to the building of this country. This is not just slave quarters or a plantation site; it tells us about our heritage” (Brunius 16). Throughout the history of our country, leaders and large groups of people have made seemingly irreparable mistakes. The institution of slavery was a sad mistake, but the first step to healing this wound in our country’s history is a deeper understanding of this issue and its history. Centuries later, the Ashanti symbol (Sankofa) found on the African-American man’s coffin, is perhaps an eloquent reminder that we are still called to, “Look to the past to inform the future” (Satchell 52).

 

Works Cited

 

Brunius, Harry. “African Burial Ground Under New York Streets.” The Christian Science Monitor 17 June 1999: 16.

Collison, Michele. “Disrespecting the Dead.” Black Issues in Higher Education Apr. 1999: 16-17.

Ferris, Marc. “Neighborhood Report: Lower Manhattan; 8 Years After the Bones, More Battles.” The New York Times 21 Mar. 1999: Sec. 14, pg. 6.

Gaines, Patrice. “Bones of Forebears; Howard U. Study Stirs Ghanaian Chiefs to Honor Ages-Old Link to U.S. Blacks.” The Washington Post 3 Aug. 1995: B01.

LaFee, Scott. “Grave Injustice; Archaeologists are Beginning to Unearth the Buried, Tragic Secrets of America’s First Slaves.” The San Diego Union-Tribune 15 Sep. 1999: E-1.

“New Chief of African Burial Ground Project.” The New York Beacon 16 June 1999: 12.

Satchell, Michael. “Only Remember Us.” U.S. News & World Report 28 July 1997: 51-52.

Singleton, Theresa A. “The Archaeology of Slave Life.” Before Freedom Came: African-American Life I the Antebellum South. Ed. Edward D.C. Campbell, Jr. and Kym S. Rice. Charlottesville: The University Press of Virginia, 1991. 155-175.

Staples, Brent. “Manhattan’s African Dead.” Editorial. The New York Times 22 May 1995: A14.